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WWW: fluent, original ideas, especially for question the first two questions.

EBI: Timing needs to improve. Q4 in particular is very limited.

LR: rewrite Q3/Q4 with more detail.

Learner response:

Q3:

During the short film sequence we hear that there is eerie music being played in which is non-diegetic sound. the eerie scary music being played suits the setting in the scene also the lighting in which is low key lighting, this is parallel sound. we also hear bells at the start, the audience would automatically think of a holy place like a church. this could foreshadow that there may be death taking place in the near future, this sound would be diegetic even though it is off screen. We then see that since scary music is being played whilst there are shots of the protagonist on the floor, it would make the audience automatically believe that this is the villain in the narrative. However, as soon as the second character appears in the scene the music changes and becomes more dramatical. This connotes to us as the audience that we were wrong and that there is someone else in which is possibly worse. We could also foreshadow that something bad will happen in which has something to do with this second character. When we see the two characters in the opening scene opposite each other. We hear that the main protagonist that's on the floor sighs, huffs and puffs. this could connote to us that this man is tired and maybe knows his time could potentially be up, meaning he dies tonight. after the other character shoots the character on the floor we hear a creaking noise, then it stops. this could have shown that the man who had been shot was in pain and now no longer is. the noise of the creaking could also empathise how isolated the setting was since it was so silent you could hear every single little thing in the setting, for example the boats creaking.

Q4:

At the start of the opening scene we see that the camera movement is slow, after that we see a man on the floor the protagonist. This creates an affect for the audience as it makes them think that this man is slowly dying, form him not moving much and sweating. We also see the camera movement being slow whilst there is a tracking shot of the other character walking down the stars. This makes the audience possibly fear the mystery character as we see his movements slowly and carefully. Showing to us that we may need to keep a close eye on the character. the 180 degree rule has been used in the opening scene between the two characters. However, we do not see the mystery man's face, producing an enigma code as we do not what he looks like. After the character shoots his gun, we see that we have moved away from the scene to other places of the setting in where.